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Oct 27 2008

Manic Monday: Ghost

Asperger's, autism, blogs, creative kids, guest posts, Halloween, Holidays, Manic Monday, Memes, noise sensitivity, noteworthy, sensory integration disorder, writing Prompt by Mo over at Manic Monday !  Thanks, Mo!

The Mystery of the Ghost

as told to me by Gus

In a haunted mansion in Transylvania, on a Thursday, in March, there was a weird sound.  It was a ghost.

“What an emergency!” one of the people shouted.

First, it threw a rock.  The rock was almost thrown into deep space.  It wasn’t like it was elementary or something, but the ghost said, “WOOOOOOO!”

“One North America…two North America…” said a voice.

“What was that?” said another voice.

Then another voice went, “Ya ya ya!  Ya ya ya!”  That was just a bunch of people in daycare.  The ghost got confused and went back into the grave until all that, “Ya ya ya! Ya ya ya!” stopped.

The End

P.S. Have you seen Transylvania?

My son, budding mystery/suspense author…or comedian.  I swear, I did not change a single word.  I’m struck by the fact that the ghost didn’t like noise, and also very amused by the opening line.  If only I could remember to have that level of specificity in my own fiction…

Anyway, try having your kids make up some ghost stories & let us know how it works out!  Happy Monday, y’all!

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7 Responses to “Manic Monday: Ghost”

  1. maryt/theteachon 27 Oct 2008 at 9:08 am edit this

    Andrea, I just love Gus! :) If you get another comment from me at your post about Sarah Palin ignore it!

  2. earthlingorgeouson 27 Oct 2008 at 10:11 am edit this

    This is such a neat story he made! I think he will be a great writer someday! A satire probably? Hahahaha! I love the story really!

    Thanks for dropping by my blog by the way and yeah you are lucky you already have your second child before you knew.

  3. Lindaon 27 Oct 2008 at 10:31 am edit this

    I believe that your son has a definite career ahead of himself!

    As for ghosts not liking noise, I think I can understand that as they are trying to take their ‘big dirt nap’ as my father used to call it!

  4. Anthony Northon 27 Oct 2008 at 11:30 am edit this

    A good, creative imagination there.

  5. Jamieon 27 Oct 2008 at 11:30 am edit this

    Now that is a truly budding talent with a great imagination. You are lucky to have years of great stories ahead.

  6. Micheleon 28 Oct 2008 at 8:29 am edit this

    Thanks for sharing! Gus has such a vivid imagination. I was very entertained by the story it reminded me that sometime people need a taste of their own medicine. We encounter many ghosts in our lives and sometimes we just have to scare them back!

  7. Marlaon 28 Oct 2008 at 11:38 pm edit this

    Gus is a writer in the making. Wonderful!

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